The Magic Sweetshop

Jo and Tom went out for a walk at breezy hill when they saw a path. They had never seen it before but wanted a adventure so followed it! They saw a tiny village. Then they saw a sweetshop! They looked at what the sweet's were called and they all had weird names. They went inside.They got four packs of sweets and mixed them together. They had giant sweet, a dwarf sweet, a invisible sweet and a home again sweet.When they got out of the shop they climbed over a gate and saw another town. In the town there were people who were very fat, very red and had white ruffs around their necks. One of the little cars ran into Jo! The little man started shouting at Jo. They started shouting back at him and he was angry he took out a trumpet and hooted it. Every little person came! They took hold of Jo and Tom and took them to prison. When they were thrown into the cell they ate some other sweets. They grew and must of ate the giant sweets, thy kicked open the door. Everyone ran when they saw them. Then a giant came grabbed them and called his friends. Lots of giants came and stared at Jo and Tom. They were so scared they ate another sweet. They became smaller. They were in a witch world! They ate an invisable sweet. The witches were looking for them because they had heard them. But then they ate the last sweet. They were back! Sorry there is no picture I can not find one!

My Opinion

It is very magical, I like Enid Blyton's pocket Libary!